the Scientist Syndrome

 
Oh, "scientists" who
know what
must

What disregard
for
might

Who deliver all things
spoken with
no pending
rights

Oh, you who presuppose
unjust
failing simple patterns,
failing to find the purer
form of
atoms

Binding ways hedged up
to reveal
In seeking the truth it's the
truth you
steal

And every examination
with predetermined
flaw
based on  your
ill-conditioned oversight of law

And every tittle of disbelief adds unto,
yet perplexing
queries
left for you

What promises due,

what wonders of life,

what with your disease will never come true.

Matt A. DeFranco

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is interesting and makes one think.Well penned my friend :)

[Matt DeFranco]

Thank you Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Matt :)

[Michelle N. H.]

To view the world through scientific eyes only, is to be half blind. I agree with Jack and Poppy. You seem to carry out a loud tone without the use of exclamation marks or capital letters, but simply through your choice of words. It's interesting. Nicely penned, Matt!

[Matt DeFranco]

Thank you, and yea there's a little acrimonious undertone if you will. Yet directed at myself as well in some areas. Thank you for you your thoughtful review :)

[Matt DeFranco]

Yea, there's definitely an acrimonious undertone to it. Yet directed to myself in certain areas as well. Thank you as always for your thoughtful review Michelle:)

[Michelle N. H.]

You're welcome :)

[Ruth]

Wonderful! Speaks loudly and coherently, really enjoyed hon x

[Matt DeFranco]

Thank you!

[Jack...]

Matt, this is so well written and so very loud I would say. You speak in volumed tones with this piece. Good job my friend.

[s y e]

I liked this, it got me thinking to be fair but I like it - You have some good imagery here.

Good job!

[Matt DeFranco]

Thank you very much!

[Kai Rollins]

Presumption. It seems. Gained some perspective, and that's always a great thing. Thanks for this