How To Fly

How To Fly

A Poem by Andi

You look but do not see.

You eat but do not taste.

You touch but do not feel.

You are but cannot be.

You love without a heart.

You kill without the pain.

You are here, even though you never should be.

© 2012 Andi


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I didn't expect such eloquent obscurity, I find it very tasteful and readable. Thank you for writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emotional yet deep piece, love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like this a lot. it reminds me of a little frase i use once and a while. i dont use my heart to love you. i use yours. good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this piece. It leaves the reader with something to ponder and muse over once the ink is done. Words that leave such dwellings are what is needed in a world that seems to have lost much of the mental capabilities. Very nicely woven!

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thought the poem was quite striking..just couldnt make the link with the title..I must be missing something

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow, this is powerful and flows with a cutting edge, the form captivates the
feeling of aggregation and the passion is mixed with raw emotion, excellent

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 28, 2012
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Andi
Andi

Hyde Park, NY



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