Umi

The sea knows no sin.

A cold breeze touches my skin.
The waves sing me to sleep.
I see a faint light
Coming from a nearby mountain.

Oh, Sea! Take me far, far away.
Let me float in your arms.
Let me be one with you.
Set me free, set me free...

Author's Note

Feel free to leave your opinion! Any kind od review is appreciated.

Reviews

[yuhee]

"The waves sing me to sleep. " Definitely true. I always find myself sleepy whenever I listen to the waves crashing on the shore. Great piece by the way.

[en skygge]

I'd say it's more of a state of tranquility than actual sleeping, so it's kind of a metaphore in this poem. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate the review!!

[Papaya]

I've heard that drowning is the most peaceful death. I suppose in a sense that would be very liberating.

[Capaneus]

:), i'm a fisherman and the surface of the ocean has always looked like a big comfy blanket. All hail Poseidon

[en skygge]

Agreed! I'm glad you liked it!