Every Moment With You

A Poem by The Anathematic Error

I wish I could give you every moment

Every second with you is like

My first with you, the love stays new

As we grow old, we push through

Push through the struggles of this hell

As we live our life

We’ll face pain and strive

But now our love stays strong, we survive

No! We don’t survive, we strive

And nothing will get in our way

Before now, all I felt was shame

Death was my only thought, but no

It had become more of an emotion

All I desired was the blade

All I saw was my own blood

I gave up on looking for shae

I had no control

The one under control wasn’t me, but her

She made me bleed, she made me cry

I couldn’t do anything

No matter how hard I tried

Laughed at me, spit on me

Took all the joy from my soul

She blindfolded me, I couldn’t see

Then you came in my life

You came in my soul

The harm from before starts to heal

I can finally feel

Let our future burn bright

© 2018 The Anathematic Error

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sette

i like the ending of the poem there is something to look forward to

Posted 6 Years Ago

Chris Shaw

Your poem has an uplifting ending. After pain, comes some healing. A new person in your life is helping you to move on. This is a message of hope to others. Thank you for sharing.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago

Onlyme

The reality of a wife beating up her husband or a girlfriend beating up her boyfriend. It is so refreshing to hear it from the other side. Instead of it being a woman. Telling us. No offence to anyone. I am just saying It is good to hear a man speak out about it. True, really hurt, pain and putting up due to fear and being ridiculed if anyone found out. As a man has got to be manly and tolerate a lot of things. So society says. Men have feelings and needs also. And should speak out as well.