Emptiness

I’m giving up, all hope is being lost

My body cedes control to suicide

My heart is cold, but I seem to look fine

My soul loses warmth, being covered by frost

My consciousness fades, it’s a downward slide

I have lost the fight

Losing my life, my soul

I’m becoming an empty shell

Life is going away from my sight

Due to lack of soul, my body, a shell, will never be full

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

When we lose our soul. What are we? Living dead? Nice use of words made the reader think and ponder your words and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[sette]

and as they say dont you ever quit so there is courage being sent out here