Body Image

Living with myself

Destructive force inside

Never ending dance

Rising an emotional tide.

I am too fat

Body image stress

I fall flat

I'll never guess.

I am stupid

Not good enough

Fears rooted

Living with myself is tough. 

 

Reviews

[Sam]

Wow... that was really good!! I loved how easily you where able to convey emotion and meaning. I definitely enjoyed reading it!

[Raven Moonchild]

Brilliant interpretation of the mind hating itself, dear. :) I too face hating myself most days.

[DarkArtz 0703]

I know the feeling of this... I hate living with myself

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Lots of other ages as well twenties up to seventies eighties it's the magazine advertising perfect bodies good work

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You give a voice to so many young girls who feel exactly as you do..very normal to have these feelings. Even though society wants us to look like models, accepting ourselves completely is the healthy choice. Youth is a priceless gift, so please don’t throw it away. Look in the mirror & say I AM AWESOME- because it’s true! Your little poem is sweet with good flow, rhythm and rhyme. Made me smile!

[Anastasia]

thank you for a review

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are very welcome Anastasia!

[Planet x]

many girls face that , you really described it in beautiful way