Warrior

I have constant thoughts about suicide, I wrote this poem to remind myself to keep fighting.

Walking on the edge

Of life and suicide

But i give myself a pledge

I walk with pride

I will fight

I will live

I'll shine bright

And achieve

I will struggle

I will try to suicide

I will walk through trouble

But i'll never loose my pride

Open my wings

Throw away the knife

Forget my sins

I am a warrior of life

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

Yaassss! I love to see survival stories and the will to fight. Kudos, but don't throw away the knife - just hang on to it for when you face real dragons...

[Anastasia]

i meant throw away the knife as i weapon to kill myself

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Living from day to day can, for some, can be like a waiting dragon that must be slain! Victory is inner self strength and belief in tomorrow - well penned my friend - good write!

[Raven Moonchild]

(applauds) Bravo!!! :D Keep going, dear, be like Wonder Woman and keep fighting through all that life throws at you. Don't let anything drive you to talking to the blade. (bear hugs)

[aj milton]

These powerful words demonstrate an underlying strength of will. Sh*t won't stop happening, but keep marching warrior.