Desecrated

Stiff blade

Dark room

      Naked.

 

Pink lips

Closed tight

      Slashed.

 

Red blood

Wet sheets

      Raped.

 

Strong grip

Thick neck.

      Squeezed.

 

Tight hold

Don't stop

      Done.

Reviews

[Skin]

Thank you Erotica Rules (sometimes)

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the remains of that
is what remains of that day
destruction destroys it all

[Ed Hart]

a piece of surgery, this

[Bard Constantine]

Sharp as a blade, and just as painful... I think it's the thoughts in between the short, slashing phrases that chill the blood...

[eli mercuree rue]

it's crazy, the things we want.

it's essentially human, the want for power
control
exhilaratingly painful pleasure
cos we all need to
feel'
sometimes.

me gusta

[M.Kilani]

heart-aching !! well-written piece that gives the urge to smoke a cigarette .. well done

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Anastacia Therese,

You come to me highly recommended and you didn't disappoint. I do remember the first time I had my hands around a ladies throat, it was exhilarating. The rise, within...I fealt powerful. I felt like a god. It was my control and I got to decide when, if, how fast......and the eyes....

But anyway, yes I was not disappointed and I am going to read your second posting on here. I do hope you put up more. I would love to read everything.

Always,

Matthew

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Oh my! Such simple, innocent words in themselves to describe something so horrific. That takes some serious talent. This is exceptional, my dear.

[justAnumber]

Short and to the point yet an entire story is told. I love how dark and honest this reads.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem create a scene of terror. Being naked, raped and last lines Done. In so few words you create vision of pain and abuse. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote