A Day In The Snow

 A day in the snow,

Playing and fooling around,

No worries,

But no sound,

You start to wonder,

Where is everyone,

The sky is covered,

There is no sun,

You finally realize,

That you're alone,

And all of this happened,

In the snow. 

Reviews

[Jonathan Ballam]

This was an interesting merry-go-round of thoughts and feelings. Lovely write. I would sugget may to just end on the words 'in the snow' which could make the ending tighter.