Why are you haunting me?

Why are you haunting me?

A Poem by Ana

I can see the darkness in your eyes,

A dark presence in your body,

Your isolation scares me,

Why are you haunting me?

Are you the ghost of my past?

You say your nothing,

But I know it can't be,

Who sent you?

Why are you here?

Are you me?

Why are you haunting me?

Your dark eyes,

Your long hair,

You float and take my air,

I ask ever so afraid,

Who are you?

Are you me?

Why are you haunting me?

Why?

 

 

 

© 2008 Ana


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Quite fascinated with the ghost; it appears that it represents quite a range of symbolical meanings.
I like this poem. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


wow!!
this is alittle scared..
pero..
me encanta

Posted 16 Years Ago


I see alot of emotion here. It makes the reader think that the person haunting them is themselves. It was a bit too specific on the details of the description. It should be a bit more general so the reader can think it can be anyone, even themselves.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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