Walk in the Park

You hold my hand

You grasp me tight

You swear its not a sham

And you say,

 

Let's take a walk in the park

 

I say "no,"

You say "Let's go,"

You try to convince me but I say,

 

No

 

I look at my hand,

You look so sad,

For inside the was a ring that u placed in my hand,

I grasp it tight and with all my might I say,

 

Let's take a walk in the park

 

You say "It was meant to be special,"

And I say "I still is,"

You grab my hand again and we both say,

 

Let's take a walk in the park

 

Reviews

[Ana]

hahaha! i lub u becca!

[Simplicity]

it's full of love, but it's not sappy!! It's like true love! Aw, who knew you had it in you?? Anyway, great poem, great job...and whoever's lucky enough to marry u is gonna be a cool guy. (if not, i'll be happy to use my shovel and 'dispose' of him...hehehe...)

[Mariana]

q bonito!!
me encanta..
its lovely..
so full of love...
and so beautiful
keep up the good writting..
its very well written