I'm Watching Over You

This comes from the heart, and it goes to all my friends.

When your sad,

When your mad,

When you can't stand anyone anymore,

 

I'm watching over you

 

When look at the stars,

When look down in the ground,

Everytime you fall down,

 

I'm watching over you

 

When it's not your day,

When you feel alone,

When you are sick and cold,

 

I'm watching over you

 

Even though I'm not there anymore,

Even though I left,

When you need me to be there for you,

 

I'm always watching over you

Reviews

[Simplicity]

hey, awesome poem. It gives the reader the impression that the person talking can either be passed away, a distant friend, or even a close relative or lover. It gives everyone the oppurtunity to relate to the poem.

[Ana]

Interesting point of view Mariana Silvia. That's exactly what I was aming for when I wrote this. Mariana Toro! I am not better than you! We both have a passion for writing and we are both good at it.

[Mariana]

Hey Analia!!!
esto esta precioso!!
me encanta.. it gonna be one of my favorites
love ya..
keep up the good work..
you have always been better than me

[Mariana Silva]

If I didn't know better, it would seem as if you are taking on an ethereal viewpoint and then it can also be seen as a person who simply moved away and still keeps in constant contact with their friends. Its a very good poem.