God vs. god

God vs. god

Stale mate frenzy

Oil oil oil

Desecrate holy land

Blood all around

Oil only here

War of oil

And mass death

Even or own

Have fallen

For a stupid cause

Why haven’t you pulled out?

Stopped the madness

Of god vs. god

Reviews

[brock]

yer sounds about right legion about 'god on our side'
thanks jenny im really feed up with "broken heat" poems
their to self loathing so i try and write about something tht matters and hope people understand

[Deleted]

You know what? I like your poems. That probably sounds like a weird thing to say, but it's not like saying, "I like THIS poem." I like your style of writing, and so I like your poems. It's good to see people touching on more important subjects such as this one. I like the last six lines the best.
Keep it up!

[Legion]

Perhaps it should be godless vs. godless. "God on our side" is an illusion we (humanity) uses to justify the horrors we perpetrate on others. Good work.