no freedom

no freedom

A Poem by brock

Freedom no more

Black and white is what we wear

No escape

Doors slam tight

Voices silenced

Speak and doomed be thyn

You said this couldn’t

Be done

Government controlled

Living is what we’ve become

© 2009 brock


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"No escape
Doors slam tight
Voices silenced"

I really liked that bit, because it sounded extremely sharp, sudden, and final.
I also liked the last line.
Good job!


Posted 15 Years Ago



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brock
brock

perth, Australia



About
hi im Brock im usually really shy but i find my true voice in writing my poems aren't always so straight froward they have hidden meanings if your willing to look or just ask if u want ill add an.. more..

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A Poem by brock