The lost love

A story of two people who met in college, eventually fell in love, but the world keeps nodding the duo. The B-Hun fight a battle everyday to rise their love up to the level of eternity...and beyond.

A broken heart is what I feel
It leads to flowing tears
The sorrow from this loneliness
Gives way to deeper fears
I hurt inside from losing you
I'm often asking why?
How could this end so suddenly?
I feel like I could die
It wasn't very long ago
That you and I embraced
It feels like only yesterday
And now my soul's displaced
I'm trying to find a peaceful thought
Where you and I were strong
But in the absence of your love
My happiness has gone
For all the times we've laughed, we've hugged
And all the times we've kissed
For all the times we've made sweet love
Your touch is what I've missed
I truly hope there comes a day
When love will reunite
I'll wipe away these lonely tears
I cry throughout the night

Author's Note

Both positive and negative reviews are more than welcome.

Reviews

[Rahul]

Very heartfelt poetry you come to bleed in. Loved the line:

"In the absence of your love,
My happiness has just gone..."

So much truth & many general vibes of your wined heart are captivatingly displaced in words. Yeah, it's quite weird & abstract to see, feel & mesmerise that how love brings happiness, joy & peace to life, and how fastly it also carries the loath of tears, heartaches, & disgust to very lonesomeness nights that hustle one love-soul to emptiness.

College day're pretty amazing days (EXCEPT attending lectures.. lol) so i believe, you've narrated everything about love & its shades very well in this extraordinary poetry. Wonderful work, Ananya. Keep writing. I'm hoping to look forward to reading your work, pretty.

[Happy hours]

dark but very touching. thanks for sharing

[Saddam]

Gives way to deeper fears
I hurt inside from losing you

Well said and real time words are they. I can imagine the scars of heart.

[Ananya Garg]

thank you :)