Canvas of life !!!

on suggestion of my friend i am writing the canvas of lifee

canvas of life;
full of vivid colours;

from moon to noon;
noon to night so soon;
Days & nights draws life;

sorrows & pains add on the dark shades;
happiness & fun add on the lighr shades;

today tomorrow are canvas of life;
everyone got;

so live life,
bcz
canvas of life;
full of vivid colours!!!-anant:-):-)

Reviews

[Lenah Mehzabin]

OW this one is really a nice poetry ..our life is full of different colors and experience..the rhythm u mixed with the example of nature made it a successful poetry :)

[anant mody]

dearrrrr u reallyyyy made my dayy

thanks for ur comment
n speciallyy last line successful poetry
feels like today im really a poet
thanks a lot:-):-):-)

[Prabha Salimath]

You have honoured my words so thank you and the msg is beautiful... Thanks for sharing.....

[anant mody]

areeee yaarr honuring is mine that i got ur beautiful suggestions n.lines to write
so keep inspiring.meee:-):-):-)