to love and to be loved again

an innocent heart that beats in me

searches for love that was meant to be

is it too much to ask

to love and to be loved again

a smile that was lost a long time ago

searches for a reason to be found again

was it too good a bargain

to love and to be loved again

a song that remained incomplete

searches for a soul to be complete

has my mind really gone insane

it wishes to love to be loved again

a hope that still remains

searches for someone to end this pain

were emotions gone numb to not regain

to love to be loved again....

Reviews

[Moflo]

This was great. I loved your use of repetition and the message comes out very emotional. I also love the sense of longing you portray and the, almost existential, outlook your narrator portrays. Great write.