break away

lets go away, lets hide
where its just you and me
lets go away, far and wide
where we are meant to be
take me with you
away from this place
i have had it with this world
the world i don't belong to
the hostility more than i can bear
lets go away from this place
somewhere, find our world
hold my hand and be my courage
as i am yours
lets break away, these rules
rules and restrictions don't apply to us
well... not anymore
come away, lets explore the horizon
lets venture in to the unknown
dreams.nightmares and horrors everywhere
wake me up, make them go away
lets walk in to the sunset
lets make tomorrow a new day...

Reviews

[The Don]

Great job great job. very heart toching poem for me personally, but also I really enjoy your image and story. i feel like this sometimes about the country i live in and even also the world since its not just us making mistakes here but everyone. also how you even set some romantic/love imagery in there like a love story as well, really good job, keep up the good writing Anamika

[Anamika]

thank you so much :)

[The Don]

most definitely friend.

[zainul]

So sweet write on elopement!

[Wórdsmíth]

That's an amazin' write, that's all.