disregard

I’m sure it’s startling, to suddenly go from meaning so much, to meaning so little.

You know a girl is
really hurt if she calmly
starts to ignore you

Author's Note

all comments welcome

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

so much said within a few lines
sometimes one just cannot deal
with even more sadness
nice work

[anais.vionet]

I’m a sucker for apologies - it’s usually the second stupid thing that turns me off - thank you!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh tell me about it! I know and wish you had been around years ago to warn me. Again your amazing wit strikes.

[anais.vionet]

Thank you =]

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Anais. A unhappy young lady can freeze you, where you stand. Amazing use of words. You wrote everything needed in the poetry.
Coyote

[anais.vionet]

Thanks! I had two other verses but after thinking about it I went with this (which was the first).

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well dear Anais and you are welcome.