romance rambling

romance rambling

A Poem by anais.vionet
"

romance - in the age of pandemic - can we restrict the field any more??

"
The conversation
takes an crushy turn - so my 
brain starts making quips.

My experience is
that my amorous impulses 
are unreliable.

With my friends, my flawed,
carnivalesque attempts
at romance are legend.

Unless I'm starved
for embarrassment's grief
which I seldom am.

I will dodge, slither,
obfuscate and stall attempts
at intimacy.

What if I’m the 
Kind of girl that guys can’t
just fall in love with?

© 2020 anais.vionet


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anais.vionet
all comments welcome

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This is something I relate with - a lot! I've been here before. I noticed that all of your stanzas ended with periods (or, in the case of the last one, a question mark). It feels like every stanza is a new thought, which I like, but they're also all connected - something I also like a lot. Your last stanza - the question "What if I’m the /Kind of girl that guys can’t/just fall in love with?" is something I'm extremely familiar with, after a long time of asking myself. I love your poem!

Posted 4 Years Ago


anais.vionet

4 Years Ago

Thank you =] I recently started writing Senryus and although they can be limiting, they're also .. read more

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Added on September 3, 2020
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Tags: romance, love, teen, doubts

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