Perhaps

Perhaps

A Poem by anabelliebee
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Perhaps, forgetting is the best way to mend your shattered heart.

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Perhaps, forgetting is the best way. 
For all the things didn't go the way you planned it.
Chances you take before giving up. 
Endless restart that you've been doing for years.
Failures leave indelible marks. 
Hope turns to disappointment. 
Perhaps, forgetting is the best way to remove all the pains. 
Perhaps, forgetting is the best way to mend your shattered heart.

© 2024 anabelliebee


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Looks great!!!
Lisasview, now in Spain

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like your poem but feel it needs to have the lines separated instead of a paragraph from a book...
First read of yours and I do not know if you would apprecate my help... but
just a simple line structure makes your poem much easier to read... there are more things ..like different punctuation, etc. to make your poem stand out.

Lisasview

Perhaps
Perhaps
A Poem by anabelliebee
" perhaps forgetting is the best way to mend your shattered heart "

Perhaps forgetting is the best way.
For all the things didn't go
the way you planned it.
Chances you take before giving up.
Endless restart that you've
been doing for years.
Failures leave indelible marks.
Hope turns todisappointment.
Perhaps forgetting is the best
way to remove all the pains.
Perhaps forgettingis the best way
to mend your shattered heart.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


anabelliebee

2 Weeks Ago

I sincerely appreciate your feedback.
It helps me a lot better.
Many thanks.

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Added on September 4, 2024
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A weak person with a very strong God I N T R O V E R T more..

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