Falling apart

Broken heart and crumpled thoughts

if that was not enough for falling apart

why din't you take away my dreams and hopes to live?

because without you it meaningless even to breath

if only strength was  piece of glass you would know 

how it pokes and how hard it broke,

you took away piece of me when you set apart

that me which i will never get back

you took away the words from my silence 

with tears drying up from mere my eyes

if sorrow was the only scar that it leaves

i would have still rubbed it off from my being.

falling apart and stand up again 

may be that is the only relief for every pain

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

You express your emotions beautifully.