Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by Amy Skye
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Suffering and torment hold Cress in a state of disillusion.

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Agony swept through her veins as reality clarified in her mind. A wave of ice and fire coursed through her, like roots through the ground, twisting and digging into every inch of skin. Her eyes remained closed, the darkness that loomed beyond her eyelids was just that, darkness. Deep down, she knew this was her life now. A void of black agony for however long this would last. She stopped counting the days, time seems to all mesh together. Days felt like months, hours often felt like minutes. Time was arbitrary here, a useless tool designed by those who wished to calculate prolonged torture. Every inhale of breath was like drowning in acid. Movement was impossible. All she can do was lay there, motionless in blackened suffering. 

That is what the Vat did, it diminished any cling you had at reality, cutting it away, piece by piece, until you are nothing more than a manufactured vessel of moist flesh. Giving you no hope other than the solace of a quick death at the end of it all. And that was all she could hope for. The anesthesia that was meant to keep her mind and body stagnant had worn off many agonizing breaths ago. As she inhaled her lungs were filled with liquid infused with just enough oxygen to allow her to breath. Oxygen-rich Perfluorocarbon. An oxygenated liquid designed to allow air-breathing organisms to breath while submerged. The process was painful to endure on its own, and once they pervade it with the chemicals used to generate perpetual life, the side effects are excruciating. 

So, she lay there, static in solitude, though often she thought she could hear the faint sounds of conversing beyond her iron dwelling. The voices beginning to construct in her ears, usually muffled by the fluid around her, became more lucid. The words and sentences started to become comprehensible. The Vat began to drain, and her first breath of air was met with an immediate retch and convulsing as her body tried desperately to get rid of the fluid in her lungs. Her mind still wavering as she was lifted from the Vat dripping in solution. A sudden onslaught of water erupted, hitting her like a thousand tiny needles digging into her skin. When her conscious mind was finally able to grasp the reality forming around her, her eyes opened to witness a man in a white coat coming to her side and forcing a syringe into her neck. And in an instant, her mind was met with blackness yet again. 



© 2020 Amy Skye


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Love this. Already. Smooth wording. Kept me wanting to read on.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amy Skye

4 Years Ago

Thank you Jason! I hope you continue to read :) I appreciate the feedback.
Could be an interesting story when finished...

You don't have to follow another's suggested editing - of course, but you could acknowledge that you chose not to (even without a why) rather than thank them for the help and do nothing. I questioned several but is your choice after all.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Amy Skye

4 Years Ago

Of course, I always take anothers input, as I am very new at writing. Especially when it comes to se.. read more
Chris

4 Years Ago

I shall...just marked this page. And thank you for expressing yourself.
I like the last few sentences a lot. I'm thinking I'll give this a chance. I love a good book. Your words have a power to them.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Amy Skye

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I hope you enjoy. This is my first novel.
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Lox
Very powerful and concise use of words! Every sentence stack that strength of massiveness to be polished beautifully by the ending line. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Amy Skye

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate it! :)
Very good indeed. Well articulated words. Keep up the great work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amy Skye

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your review Levi!
Very good description in this prologue of your novel that helps you picture just what's going on.
Try to fix this sentence: All she can do is lay there, motionless in blackened suffering - All she could do was lay there.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Amy Skye

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I truly so appreciate all of the help! This is my first novel. :)

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Hello, I am Amy.I am a sarcastic soul with a headstrong attitude and a do-gooder complex. I have a soft spot for the dystopian, sci-fi, and post-apocalyptic genres. more..

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