My Soul Does Bleed

Drops of blood pound the floor,

The blade it laughs with hate.

The reflection in that dark red pool

Screams out my final fate.

My knees they drop, my head does bow

And tears of pain I cry.

I gasp for air though no ones there

It's more than my body that dies.

Author's Note

one of the darkest poems i've written but for some reason it just came to me

Reviews

[OT]

always so sinister when dark thoughts and moments are pressed through a rhyme - the innocence mingling with the darker imagery - haunting piece!! nice!

[Chris38]

Very dark indeed. Reminds me of my poem Bathtime.

[Heather D]

wow wow wow. very dark, but i love it. i love that it rhymes, im a rhymer, and i love the flow. great job.

[poems with feeling]

I love it its and emo price

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

like this. its short and simple. i can totally relate