Winter

Next to the window I sit
Watching the frosty wind moan
I wish, oh wish that snow may fall

I sit beside my window day after day
Each day I have but one wish
That this year it may snow.

I sit beside the window watching the raindrops fall
I watch them drip upon the ledge
until I see some whitness fall

I get up from the window and run round to my door
Instead of rain, which I see no more
there is snow falling really slow.

As I stand outside my door
I wonder how it may be
Did all my wishing help me
To bring snow to my community.

Author's Note

Wrote this one last winter

Reviews

[Michael Thrower]

I love winter. When it comes I get the warm and cozy feeling of home. Contradicting right? Yet, I mean the chimney lit inside, family and friends huddled close, and the cool breath of fresh air outside the door. It's such a magical time, winter. The land looks beautiful covered in snow and decorated for holidays. It's the best time of the year as well as the happiest time, usually. I love it and I love this poem. Good job on it; let it snow.

[sonnetmoon]

This poem is very good. I especially like the first stanza. Sorry for the late response to your request. Please continue writing.
-sonnetmoon.

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

I would absolutely love to give you the snow Long Island gets. I'm not particularly fond of it

[Vidya Bacchus]

I am from a tropical country so no snow for me lol.Your poem is very nice keep writing

[writ rajat]

nice write keep writing I enjoy your write and winter

[Tea]

Nicely written, I've never seen the snow before your so lucky.

[Amy Cowan]

Woah!! Here we only get a little bit of snow I wish we had more

[Tea]

Yeah, where I am we don't get any snow.

[Death Girl]

I like this nicely written even though i don't like the snow

[Amy Cowan]

haha thanks a lot

[Simon Welsh]

Love that first stanza. Snow is purity (for the most part).

[Lexi Villanueva]

This is beautiful good job it makes me picture a little kid running to the door seeing snow for the first
tim ever! 100

[Amy Cowan]

:) Thanks for the reviews

[chaotic katie]

Very appropriate for the oncoming winter. It brings the magic and beauty of the holidays back into the picture and causes readers to focus less on the freezing cold and slush that they annually dread. Nice job.