Our Souls as One Wildfire

A prompt about, ash embers, fire etc. from Vol on our group (Ravin' Ink)

Our Souls as One Wildfire...

Our gazes intertwine like an electric allure, soft 

whispers in the dark,

Much like fireflies dancing in the velvety sky, 

we shimmer like a spark.

Every shimmer narrates a tale, so sweet like we 

are on cloud nine,

In a fleeting instant that feels like a precious, delicate

moment yet so divine. 

Your precious love burns me like fire, intense and 

bright,

Each kiss a luminous spark, passionately igniting

the night.

In your arms, I melt, I tremble like a fragile shell,

Turning to embers in this fiery yet sensual swell.

You pull me closer, the heat from your skin tempts me,

With every soft murmur, your sincerity warms me.

Our bodies dance to the fires around us so wild, 

and free,

In your embrace, wrapped in only satin, I completely

lose all of me.

Even if your love turn me to ash again, I want only you,

Myself reborn a Phoenix, even the Gods knew, t'was only 

for you.

My golden wings crafted specially for you, your burning 

love feeds my soul,

The two of us, like wildfires in the night, just two souls

making a whole.

So let this fiery intimacy draw us closer than before,

As the flames encircle us deeply, I vow to fully explore.

Your love, a fervent blaze is a treasure I shall forever

embrace,

In the rhythm of our desires, I have found my eternal 

place.

©A.R.H  // October 21, 2024

 

Reviews

[Dave W.]

I really liked the line "Our gazes intertwine like an electric allure, soft whispers in the dark, Much like fireflies dancing in the velvety sky, we shimmer like a spark." I love the imagery, that spark between two lovers, the intimacy of the dark and firefly's dancing. This is a beautiful picture you have created.

[Amy R]

Thank u so much for your very warm review.

[Tom]

Yup, if you're gonna go out, go out with a bang I say, love here limited by time yet that serves only to intensify the time together, passion like molten lava, hot, hot, hot, I can almost feel the heat from here..

Brilliant!!!

[Amy R]

Thank u so much Tom, I appreciate this. 🤗🤗

[Betty Hermelee]

A love like no other....so sensual...fiery....lightning....entwined as one...shimmering....intimacy...."wrapped in satin"...eternal...your choice of words perfect......for too lovers in their soulful embrace....love it!
Warmly, B

[Amy R]

Awww my heart,
THANK U so much B!!!
Hugss

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Amy
Warmly ,B

[The_Ancient_Rock]

The fire burns in each one's heart.
Very well written. Good poem.
Nicely done, thank you for sharing.
😃

[Amy R]

Thank u my friend.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome. 😃

[Jeyanthi]

Wow...
So much for one to take 😅...
It's not erotica rather Lovely and gentle. Passionate... kudos

[Amy R]

Thanks for reviewing my poem.😊

[Marie]

Wow! Superb sensual visual detail which captures the scintillating all consuming fire between two lovers who become one in heart, in mind, in spirit. A flawlessly penned poem wrapped in finesse and complemented by an excellent choice of graphic, dear Amy. Kudos on creating such a magnificent write! Beautiful beyond words, dear friend...

[Amy R]

Thank u very very much, included many details from a recurring dream I feel like I often live in... 🤗🌸🌸

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Amy...

[emmajoygreen]

Love bathed in pure poetry.. emotions secure, future assured, comfort in passion. The finest ingredients for love and what it can - should - mean. Superb yet natural wording, coming from a heart that beats its own personal and genuine meaning.

[Amy R]

Thank u Emma. I appreciate your review. 🌸

[Tumi]

Our Souls as One Wildfire captures the intensity of love using vivid fire imagery. The rhythm and sensuality create a strong sense of passion, while themes of transformation highlight the renewing power of love.

[Amy R]

Thank u Tumi for reviewing my poem.

[Lorry]

Ahh, when love makes you feel younger, no matter your age is always highly recommended for the good of your heart, soul and smile.
Your last line sums it up so well in finding your eternal place.
Very well captured.

[Amy R]

I agree, thank you for your kind review Lorry 😉🌸

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like the poetry dear Amy. Like the Leonard Cohen song where "Joan of Arc" found her peace in the fire. She was the wood in his song. Love can be a fire. Make us need more and more. Powerful dance of words and thoughts. Thank you dear poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Amy R]

Definitely love can be a fire. Thank u so much for your review.