Intense Gaze!

Hazel brown orbs

that devours me.

His gaze

sets me on fire.

Most 

incredible sensations!

Author's Note

Just a simple poem I came up with. Let me know what you like about it! :)
Don't forget to rate/share/review. Have a great day.
-Amy

Reviews

[Marie]

Eyes like melted Maltesers could set a girl's heart on fire and you have painted a very sensual picture of how his gaze caused a volcano of sensation to erupt all over your body in this little gem, dear Amy. Lovely play with words! Thank you for sharing, dear friend. Lovely work!

[Amy R]

Thank u very much, ahah,
who wouldn't love a beautiful pair of eyes. ;)

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Amy.
Eyes are the windows to the soul and who can resist them, especially when they are brown and like melted chocolate ;)))

[Amy R]

Ahahah, true!!🤗❤❤
I can't. I always get lost in his eyes every so often.

[Marie]

SO beautiful! Thank you for sharing, Amy...

[B]

Mine is blues
not mine
but my baby
He has got the most beautiful eyes in the world
i look away alot
because if i look
i swear i drop my books and my bag
lol
plus i dont want to freak him out
but seriously i realized last time i was gonna drop my stuff
if that happened oh my gosh
i would be ready to go into a grave and just dig myself in for life

Lovely

[Amy R]

nice !! :)
thanks for reviewing!

[Coyote Poetry]

The eyes. Can steal our mind and heart with a glance. Thank you Amy for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Amy R]

thank u for always reviewing. I really appreciate :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoy your work.
'

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
Keep it up!

[Amy R]

thank you.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "His gaze
sets me on fire."
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Amy R]

thank u so much :)
i really appreciate hearing this.
and sure i will!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thanks Amy!
Your very welcome!

[Amy R]

no problem :)

[Relic]

The eyes can be stimulating and captivating when we voluntarily drown in them with desire.



100

[Amy R]

thanks Relic!

[Tomoe Tellez]

I loved this. People rarely admire brown eyes like this, it's always blue or green. Great poem.

[Cody]

Simple yet gracious, baby.

[Amy R]

thanks Cody :)

[terry smith]

Nice to know not everyone has to have blue eyes. :)

[Amy R]

yes :) thanks

[Jamestown]

Well penned and expressed!
few words that say a ton,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Amy R]

thank you for ur review! :)