Weak

A small poem I though of this morning.

Another day passes by,

with new scars to cover.

And the truth I can't deny,

I am weaker than ever.

The reason? I don't know why,

But I am hoping to discover.

Author's Note

Please tell me about the errors I fell in in this poem :)

Reviews

[New Theory]

Good structure for a short poem.

[Amal N]

Thank you :)

[New Theory]

you are welcome :)

[Sourav]

BE strong... Be positive and have fun!

[M. Al Farra]

The biggest error is that your poem is negative. It gives the reader a negative feeling. However, it should make the reader feel excited and motivated.

[Amal N]

It is meant to give a negative feeling, it is a negative/sad poem. Thank you :)

[M. Al Farra]

You can write another one reflecting positivity. People love to feel happy not sad.

Great Job.

[Woody]

nice little poem. may I suggest "uncover" instead of "discover"? :)

[Amal N]

Thank you! Yes, that's exactly what I need, suggestions to make it better :) thanks again.

[Woody]

you're welcome.