Give me a break!

Just a silly poem I wrote while angry

Standing in the middle of this way

Not knowing whether I should leave or stay

Part of me wants to continue until the last day

But a bigger part is saying this game is too hard to play.

 

If only I could go back to that moment when I surely knew

That I can successfully do anything I have to do.

If only I had someone beside me to talk to

I wouldn't be writing this lame poem to you!

 

I have so many promises to make

But this is so hard for me to take

I wish I could leave all this and take a break

so people, stop bothering me....FOR GOD'S SAKE!!

 

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

There are days we need to be like a turtle and crawl into our shells....days when we don't want to be nice to anyone and don't want to deal with questions. I totally understand. I liked the rhyming in this poem. Hope you felt better after writing it! Lydi**

[Amal N]

Thank you very much :)
And yes, it does feel a lot better putting your anger in a poem.

[Justin]

This got me thinking...Turtles got it made ya know? If they don't wanna talk to no one, all they gotta do is go inside the shell. I wish I could be a turtle.

[Amal N]

Haha! Oh yeah, lucky turtles!

[Lydia Shutter]

:) the two of you are funny!

[Justin]

This is what I would like to say to someone. Great poem.

[Amal N]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)

[Neeraj V Murali]

A nice poem. Splendid scheme of words... A thumbs up Amal! :)

[Amal N]

Thank you :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I would say a rant...
but you put forth some time...
with the rhyme scheme...here...
at times the best way is just to be alone...
and let the air clear and refocus...

[Amal N]

Thank you for reading and for your opinion :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Stephen]

This poem's expressing your feelings how warm and firey you are inside the heart. People give you happiness so they give pain but you just want happiness not anymore being insane cus, angels hate being bother by demons.

O' by the way, I hate people making an angel bother. lol

[Amal N]

lol, thank you very much :)

[Honey-Bee]

Nice poem! I understand the feeling of being in the middle and wanting to give up and yet wanting to continue to the end. Mostly, I understand the feeling of wanting to be left alone and not have so many people bother you and yes, give me a break for heaven sake.

[Amal N]

Thank you very much :)