Lost in the days

There comes a time in your life when you no longer know what to do.
To have a beautiful moment back after running away from you.
When you can't find the person you are supposed to go to.
And your sky is filled with clouds and is no longer blue.
Then comes a person who seems like he knew.
Every feeling you feel though you gave him no clue.
And all your dreams after that seem to become true.
For life is good times, bad times, and in between: a special friend that helps you get through.

Reviews

[New Theory]

beautiful poem, of finding that one someone special,
my suggestions (just my opinions.)

Take out the references of he , him and replace with "they" and "them". Would be more relatable universally.

Then comes a person who seems like they knew.
Every feeling you feel though you gave them no clue.

[Amal N]

Thank you very much, I appreciate your suggestion :) English isn't my native language that's why I sometimes don't really know what to use, so thanks again :)

[New Theory]

No problems, neither is it mine, you are already so good and you will get better

[Justin]

Good friends is the key to everything I think. When everything is bad, if you still got them friends to help you get through it makes the difference

[Amal N]

True indeed. Thank you for reading

[Stephen]

Yeah, when the friends meet together get lost into the days where they've used to taste the benefits of friends. All the sensation of your feelings ...of this write healing the hearts of readers.

[Amal N]

Thanks a lot :)