No more questions

Just a poem I wrote in the bus on my way home..

Don't add misery to my misery;
Don't tell me I have to speak up my mind;
My mind is busy with things that wouldn't concern you;
I am looking for things I might never find;
Unfulfilled wishes, dead dreams and lies;
And yet you come and ask if I have something to hide;
Life wouldn't stop being mean to me;
I am tired of being forgotten, I am tired of being tied.

Reviews

[New Theory]

A hard hitting poem describing the need and want of a person for their personal space and to let them be just them. When you have nothing to hide why do people have to keep asking as if something is there to hide. Nice poem.

There again in the end you are saying I am tired of being forgotten, I am tired of being tied is great way to end it showing the helplessness in the situation.

[Amal N]

Thanks for reading and for the review :)

[New Theory]

You are welcome :)... Do hang by and check out my work ... :)
Thanks :)

[Amal N]

I certainly will! :)

[New Theory]

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[Stephen]

Nice shot!
I think, your very good at writing and much creative than other angels. I've read your many stuffs and one thing i've figured out that your writes are well penned with much rhymes n which's good by me to read and enjoy. Your beauty of words and the grip pf rhythm kept me on your pages leaving my scent into the words.

Keep writing and spreading your scents into the forms of words. I loved your working way, pretty.

[Amal N]

Thanks a lot. I am happy you liked my writings :)
Though so many people told me I should stop rhyming much because it is kinda old and seems forced. So, I am trying that too :)

[Stephen]

Much pleasure!
Well ... heyy..let the people go into the winds, angels never hear 'em ..they make their own decisions what they want to get and how they make their demons landed on them ..lol
Your damn cool at rhyming, I love reading stuffs which're written with rhythm which's the reason i've left much reviews to you ... cus, I do write songs and I love reading such kinda stuffs you penned. All stuffs you've penned are now my fav. ones and yeah ..you the angel became my fav. angel of this demon so, keep posting, i'd love to read your much stuffs as long as am on this site and hey...don't stop writing with yer hot rhyme, pretty ..your cool ;)

[Amal N]

lol thank you, would love to read some of your songs as well :)

[Stephen]

Again, it's my pleasure to feel the scent of an angel right across the blue oceans ;P
Whao ...now an angel wants to read demon's songs. Whao. awesome! Heyy ... i'll send you my song's link via mail within the few seconds ... Stay tuned.
By the way ... do you like reading plays?Actually, I do write plays, songs, poems and yup novels too..so now it does depend on an angel what she'd love to read from this demon :)

[Amal N]

I like reading anything so don't worry :) And wow your write novels too? I am writing my first novel but still a bit confused about it, I don't know if I can be good enough.

[Stephen]

Thanks, pretty ...your far kind. Yup, I do write novels. Woaow..you too write novels. I love angels who read and write novels. Hey, don't be worry of yer novel much, I hate watching angels take much stress about anything so, be cool. Just sit down lonely and write write and write whatever you want to ....open up yer heart and see how demons'd love an angel's novels :)
So, when are you planning to upload yer first pretty cool novel? :)

[Amal N]

I don't know when I am going to finish it, but I might upload the first chapter or whatever soon to see some opinions if I should continue or just throw the idea outta my head lol

[Stephen]

Lol ... great to hear from an angel.
Well ...Alll the best for your beautiful novel...hope to read an angelic stuffs soon.
Heyy, what an angel loves doing with her free time?

[Amal N]

erm...day dreaming and writing lol

[Stephen]

Lol, now that's what the angels love doing with their free time. Ha!
Keep Dreaming and Writing and of course, winning the hearts of demons with your kind beauty ;P