Alice in RealLand

a rabbit hole
and Shattered dreams
caught the air
chase a mist
I find myself
on my way down

on my way down
I have lost identity
a chain of lies
lasted until eternity

on my way down
faces lost their features
what was hope?
what is fear?
what will be sanity?
so confused,
what will become of me

on my way down I read
"eat me" .. and I did
so what?
the door's still small
I'm still as ugly as before
and I'm on my way down

I read "drink me"
and I did
too many doors
I have no key
and that small door
would never change
as my burning dreams
derange..

On my way down
a queen of hearts
a deck of cards
and disappearing cats

"time for tea"
on my way down
I'll hear it 'til eternity
talking eggs
painted flowers
spinning in my head

I look I see no bottom
how much longer will I be
on my way down?

Reviews

[Lorraine Pearson]

Poor Alice...she really did have a time of it! I enjoyed the feeling of falling--scrolling down as I read. This and the repeated, "on my way down" had an awesome effect. Cool read.
~Lorraiyne