canal

canal

A Poem by a.s. mcvicker
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i had to write this for my creative writing class... my teacher seemed to like it, even though i don't

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canal
 
five miles east of the head gates
that pull water out of the Arkansas River
and feed it into the canal,
is a bridge.
this bridge is really nothing more than a steel grate,
15 feet across and 4 feet wide.
this spot served several purposes in my youth.
 
it was a daily retreat for my friends and i
because it sat up on a hill
and from the road below, you couldn’t see if anyone was there
we would sit on the bridge for hours
the muddy water crashing and rushing beneath us. 
on windy days, it would blow into your face.
we would talk about everything,
school to the future.
 
sometimes i would go out there alone
and just watch the canal.
i would imagine the water was my life.
turbulent and bumpy here, but it would get better later.
and i looked down the canal as far as i could. 
i would try to see out onto the plains
where the water was taken by farmers
to water their crops. 
and i prayed to an unknown god
that i would someday share a life-giving water too.
 
there were trees growing in the dirt next to the canal. 
in the summer, they were in full bloom
and smelled sweet as they hung over the canal.
in the fall, when the canal was empty and the leaves falling,
the place would look so lonely
and i would feel the same loneliness
in the face of the coming winter. 
but spring would come,
the canal would fill
the trees would bloom
and my spirit would sing again.

© 2009 a.s. mcvicker


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a.s. mcvicker
i rarely use capital letters or punctuation

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i love to write and dream of publishing a novel... but i am also horrible at finishing anything! i love to come up with little scenes that are unconnected to anything, but i have a hard time tying .. more..

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A Poem by a.s. mcvicker