another couple of couplets

another couple of couplets

A Poem by ali
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make of it what you will these are not necessarily the same poem, although they can be if you like

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He made me cry
and ruined my clothes
But life moves on,
I live a ghost.
I bit the string
of sweater thread
wished most of all
that I was dead.
My crayon heart
melts in the sun,
down the pavement
the colors run.

© 2011 ali


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You know Ali, you come up with some of the best imagery I have read. They could stand apart, but I defiantly love them together...I love the innocent feel of the crayon heart, biting at the loose thread of the sweater, feels like a nervous action or reaction, and how you start it out with the feeling of being transparent.

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Salt Lake City/ Moraga CA, UT



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