A little something that came to me this morning

I dont come up with rhymes often, so when I do, I have to post them here

A love that left me bruised and scarred,

but not the kind where I'm abused or harmed.

He fills me with his love and hate

Neither of which I can reciprocate.

Author's Note

thats all i got....

Reviews

[limbalring]

Wow, I love the unexpected viewpoint. Very refreshing. Opened my mind.

enjoyable flow and rhyme scheme. Written very nicely!

[Saraplenty]

I want to be able to go to there.

[Tommy]

This flows really nice, and is emotion felt. Nice little diddy. I think it feels quite complete...

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[Gone]

It is quite complet in itself. Emotions shared in a fair way. Nice diciplined write. The temptation is always to villify and you have refrained from that. Well done.