Happy New Year

about a new years kiss from 2010 at a rave.

Opalescent shades of wordplay

I stared into the serpent’s eyes

And kissed a jaw that had broken three times

 

I’m a regular at bar fights

Reviews

[trainwreck]

this was pretty awesome! Very few poems of this length actually rhyme, which works very, very well in this poem. I enjoyed the color comparison of words in the first line as well. Over all, it was a really good poem and I would love to read more like it.

[William Maisonave]

I like this

[Penulis Kecil]

Congratulations on your honorable mention in the short story contest!

I really love the elegant simplicity of this, and the curious mix of tenderness and violence.

[An owl on the moon]

With these brief lines, you share so much, filling the page with a gritty story. There is a world at work in your words!

[Wolfwind Words]

You gotta love big words. This was a great piece, filled with a micros splash of a lot of things. Really well put together.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

[PianoandPage]

interesting mix of sensuality and violence. i'd love to know the story behind this. you get bonus points for using "opalescent" and it flowing perfectly. :)