Finding my song

�Without the stones, the brook would have lost its song�

 

Around the pebbles,

Between the plants, I twist and

Turn, to find my song.

 

Reviews

[Moonlight]

Lovely Haiku. I'm so glad you entered this in the contest, otherwise I might not have stumbled upon it. A very pretty haiku, paints a nice picture in one's mind. I must say that the picture helps. :)
Just one thought - don't haikus have to contain at least one word in reference to any one of the four seasons? As far as I can remember, that is what my teacher taught me in high school and I've come across the concept a few times.
Once again, great haiku. Unfortunately, the contest doesn't end today - or we'd have a clear winner!!
-Moonlight

[Serendipity]

Once again, you have left me speechless. You say so much in just a few words.

Life is about "Twists and turns," but don't allown them to break you. Instead use them to make you stronger.

"Without the stones, the brook would have lost its song."
Without your heartbreak, you would not have such amazing words to share.

[Rain]

Ever so true. Don't cry over lost love, smile that it happened..is another way they say it. Rain..

[PureSyn]

I so love these, intense and so beautiful. You have definitely made this picture come to life.

Nicole