Missing you

�and realizing how much I value you...

How would I have known

That you mean so much to me,

if you were still here…

 

Author's Note

Though the emotion is conveyed here, the Senryu as a whole doesn't quite sound fine to me. Suggestions?

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is the thing which I love most about your writing.
You have that potential of conveying any feel with even 3 or 4 lines.
I mean, these three lines are so deep and they have such a great meaning within them!

And according to me, this is really perfect. I'm also not aware about a Senryu, otherwise I would have helped
:)

[John Stussy]

idk, seems complete to me. sometimes short, simple and sweet does it just fine.

[Collette]

I think you read my mind. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece. Fits perfectly into my life right now, and I really connected to it. I wouldn't change a thing with it.

[Serendipity]

How beautiful.

So much said in just a few simple words.
So much love yet pain at the same time.

Like always, love your stuff. Reminds me of my ... loss.