Missing you

�and realizing how much I value you...

How would I have known

That you mean so much to me,

if you were still here…

 

Author's Note

Though the emotion is conveyed here, the Senryu as a whole doesn't quite sound fine to me. Suggestions?

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is the thing which I love most about your writing.
You have that potential of conveying any feel with even 3 or 4 lines.
I mean, these three lines are so deep and they have such a great meaning within them!

And according to me, this is really perfect. I'm also not aware about a Senryu, otherwise I would have helped
:)

[Kitty]

Three beautifully strong, powerful lines!!!

This is great!!!!

Josie

P.S Godd luck in my contest :)

[Aries]

Wow....three lines that speak volumes as another review stated....took the words right out of my mouth...
This says so much more than what is written...Very Powerful....Personally, I like it just as it is...

Wonderful Writing~

[Mark Pearce]

Simple. Simple. Simple.


Great. Great. Great.

[Dezaraye]

This piece speaks volumes. I think it's perfect just the way that it is. It's devastating that sometimes the only way we learn how much someone means to us is by losing them. I wish it wasn't so ... there is such pain in your words.

[TamerQtaish]

3 lines might say more than 3000 words... thats the only way i can see it with this one, I saw other of your writings and I know you have talent, so I am a bit confused with this one, but at the same time its unique!
Well done either ways

All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

[V. K. Harris]

So very true, we sometimes don't realize how wonderful it was we lost, until it's lost. Beautifully written.

[Rain]

I wish I knew more about Senryus, so I just read the lines and wait to see if they make me feel something. They did. The age old..you don't miss the water..till the well runs dry. Powerful. Rain..

[An owl on the moon]

Your words convey such power in just a few brush strokes. Actually quite haunting and beautiful.

[Nicole Renee]

This was a really lovely piece and that I got the emotion coming out of it. :D

-Nicole