Missing you

Missing you

A Poem by Imperfection
"

�and realizing how much I value you...

"

How would I have known

That you mean so much to me,

if you were still here…

 

© 2008 Imperfection


Author's Note

Imperfection
Though the emotion is conveyed here, the Senryu as a whole doesn't quite sound fine to me. Suggestions?

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This is the thing which I love most about your writing.
You have that potential of conveying any feel with even 3 or 4 lines.
I mean, these three lines are so deep and they have such a great meaning within them!

And according to me, this is really perfect. I'm also not aware about a Senryu, otherwise I would have helped
:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is the thing which I love most about your writing.
You have that potential of conveying any feel with even 3 or 4 lines.
I mean, these three lines are so deep and they have such a great meaning within them!

And according to me, this is really perfect. I'm also not aware about a Senryu, otherwise I would have helped
:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Three beautifully strong, powerful lines!!!

This is great!!!!

Josie

P.S Godd luck in my contest :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow....three lines that speak volumes as another review stated....took the words right out of my mouth...
This says so much more than what is written...Very Powerful....Personally, I like it just as it is...

Wonderful Writing~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple. Simple. Simple.


Great. Great. Great.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece speaks volumes. I think it's perfect just the way that it is. It's devastating that sometimes the only way we learn how much someone means to us is by losing them. I wish it wasn't so ... there is such pain in your words.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 lines might say more than 3000 words... thats the only way i can see it with this one, I saw other of your writings and I know you have talent, so I am a bit confused with this one, but at the same time its unique!
Well done either ways

All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So very true, we sometimes don't realize how wonderful it was we lost, until it's lost. Beautifully written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish I knew more about Senryus, so I just read the lines and wait to see if they make me feel something. They did. The age old..you don't miss the water..till the well runs dry. Powerful. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words convey such power in just a few brush strokes. Actually quite haunting and beautiful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a really lovely piece and that I got the emotion coming out of it. :D

-Nicole

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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