This is the thing which I love most about your writing.
You have that potential of conveying any feel with even 3 or 4 lines.
I mean, these three lines are so deep and they have such a great meaning within them!
And according to me, this is really perfect. I'm also not aware about a Senryu, otherwise I would have helped
:)
This is the thing which I love most about your writing.
You have that potential of conveying any feel with even 3 or 4 lines.
I mean, these three lines are so deep and they have such a great meaning within them!
And according to me, this is really perfect. I'm also not aware about a Senryu, otherwise I would have helped
:)
Wow....three lines that speak volumes as another review stated....took the words right out of my mouth...
This says so much more than what is written...Very Powerful....Personally, I like it just as it is...
This piece speaks volumes. I think it's perfect just the way that it is. It's devastating that sometimes the only way we learn how much someone means to us is by losing them. I wish it wasn't so ... there is such pain in your words.
3 lines might say more than 3000 words... thats the only way i can see it with this one, I saw other of your writings and I know you have talent, so I am a bit confused with this one, but at the same time its unique!
Well done either ways
I wish I knew more about Senryus, so I just read the lines and wait to see if they make me feel something. They did. The age old..you don't miss the water..till the well runs dry. Powerful. Rain..
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