The Noose (Jorio)

I keep blaming myself


For mistakes committed yesterday


Does that help you?


Will it heal me?

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Not the picture make the poem so much more hard hitting. A nice piece...very dramatic!

[V. K. Harris]

Very thought provoking, I like that. Great write.

[Rain]

Is there a little sarcasm in this piece ? lol

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

had a write similiar although much longer, this is indeed simple, and dramatic in every line. Nicely done.

Rayne

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Huh. Very interesting. Incredible simple, but it gets straight to the point! It's just a matter of knowing that a mistake is something that can be fixed or dealt... the problem being, does that special want to fix it? ;) Anyways, enough with my insight lol, great job! The noose made your point. XD

Ironically Yours, -Blade and Blood

[Poeticpiers]

Mistakes we can learn from if we are sensible I might even learn from your mistakes

[Laura Sparkle]

hehe... I am honored to see my poem inspired such thoughts.... So many deep words contained in 4 lines... and the picture helps hehe. Like Suicide is the way we tell God we cannot be fired, we quit. hehe

[John Stussy]

Such powerful questions that cross everyone's mind. Even crossed mine several times. I guess it's normal to think suicidally sometimes, as long as we get over those moments successfully it's okay.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

I agree with Dorothy that one can hang themselves with their own words. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Dorothy]

Very intersting. Sometimes it does seem as though our thoughts are like a noose. I like it a lot!