(Jorio) Why I did not apologize�

�Sorry doesn�t make a dead man alive�...If you agree with this proverb, then you will understand. This is not fictional.

I did not apologize,

Because sorry wasn't enough,

To restore your past,

To rebuild your trust.

Reviews

[Dorothy]

What is a Jorio? I tried looking it up and found nothing.


I like the flow of your words here. I also like the realization that you can apologize but it probably won't fix things. Overall nice write!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A wonerful piece you have wrong, very meaningfull.

[TAYLOR]

short sweet to the point ..awesome write

[James K. Blaylock]

I enjoyed reading this piece. And I wouldn't change a thing.

[jenbem]

I'm really sad that no one else who has commented knows what a jorio is either! I was hoping to get some clues! I love your poem though, form or none. It is such a true feeling, and I love how it is subtly sassy, very well written. I also love the proverb before it, it adds -so- much. If you were ever to print it else where, I would include it. I

[John Stussy]

Don't know what a Jorio, so I can only comment on the content. And what a truth it is. Apologies used to mean a lot, but poor use has led to hollow meaning.

[Alyssa Dufresne]

I need to send this to my mother.

Not too sure what a Jorio is, but that'll probably be the next Google I do.

[Lydia Shutter]

Sometimes sorry is only a word....and is a futile gesture. Simple and succinct. I am not familiar with the Jorio form, but this is a good write. Lydia

[Rin]

I like how short and simple this meaning is but yet how it holds such great meaning

[Jaded Perception]

Not knowing what a jorio is....I love it still! I adore your work am in awe of how your words just seem to flow so effortlessly. so few words say oh so much in this one! bravo my friend bravo! jade