(Jorio) Why I did not apologize�

�Sorry doesn�t make a dead man alive�...If you agree with this proverb, then you will understand. This is not fictional.

I did not apologize,

Because sorry wasn't enough,

To restore your past,

To rebuild your trust.

Reviews

[Monday Parker]

Wow this is great. So powerful and well written. It has this punch to it, the reality of the words. Great job!

[Brianna Brie]

It is a powerful proverb being true. Besides there are only so many times a person can apologize for the same thing. Sorry becomes empty when it is played over and over without change. Thank you for entering it into the Tell Me a Secret contest. Awesome write!

[justjenn_2u]

Short and to the point. Two mistakes in the relationship: he had a bad past and he lost trust in you. It's sad because the trust could have been rebuilt but not his past. Good read.

[Lia]

Great wording! Thank you xx

[Rain]

Ok, I'll wait for you to tell me which poem best explains the riddle. Lost loves are haunting, but in someways are unchallenged perfect memories. Rain..

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This piece reminded me of the first and last break up of my life.
very very well conveyed.
Yet, its short but is very powerful and vivid and you very well explained the entire feel in just these four lines.
A beautifully sad piece :(

[Serendipity]

If true love lies within these words an apology is all that is needed. Please apologize, even if it doesn't
"restore your past, rebuild your trust". You will feel better in the end.

[Ladysue]

Caffeine, wow, this one spoke to me in volumes. So much said in between this lines. Incredible, my friend!!

[Spoken]

I'm sorry I've never heard of 'Jorio' either. I don't know if this is a form coined by a particular writer's work? I tried looking it up as well and couldn't find nothing. I do think this is a good write though. If your looking for suggestions I suppose the only one I can give is to build on what you already have and go in depth, but even as a short poem it is still strong and makes a good statement of truth. (sorry I couldn't give a better suggestion)

[Poeticpiers]

brief and very much to the point Not a form I am familiar with But well expressed truth nevertheless