You visited me again

Incomplete poem

So like always, I bury my face in the pillow

To muffle my silent screams

Sleep is many many miles away

So I wait for another dawn to break…

Reviews

[Victoria Lee~]

This was hauntingly beautiful. My favorite line is " Sleep is many many miles away

So I wait for another dawn to break� " I totally can relate to that. Great job!

[Yvonne Heidt]

A beautiful description of a haunting dream. Damn, that ache goes on forever, doesn't it?

Great job.

[Gandré]

a touching dream.

[Alex]

Loved it and it made me cry because it is something I am going through rite now ,thank you for sharing ...

[Shane Patrick]

dreams take us to some hurtful and nice places... this was very moving well done my friend..

[A.L. James]

Truly moving piece. I love it.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A wonderful yet very sad piece to dream so real. A very heart breaking piece.

[Lady Tyke]

This is beautiful! Sad but so real and pure and true. You've put broken feelings into words that when laced together capture the heart of the reader.
The last stanza really touched me, because I've done the same more than once. This is really well written and flows nicely which heart fluttering descriptions. Well done!

[Jenny B.]

God your going through what i am going through! This is a present obstacle i am trying to get through and you explain it so perfectly. Why is love so hard to find, but at the same time so easy to lose. I do enjoy it. Very well done.

[Angie- Reading As Fast ..]

This is so heart breaking and beautiful at the same time. Lost love... such a tender subject everyone knows too well.