Music for my soul.

Music for my soul.

A Poem by Imperfection
"

Chofu for the contest.

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From your old letters
And in
Your final e-mail to me,
I can still hear it clearly.
It is -
-the sound of your voice.

 

© 2008 Imperfection


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This is great and so beautiful!
Short but so powerful and vivid...Full of emotions!
Every mail speaks for itself , As such according me whenever we reads any mail it seems as if that person is literally talking to us...I have a poem which is somehow very close it (My old attic)...I guess you have already read it :)
That picture is going very well with it and Congrats for winning the contest too! :)

"It is possible to cross an ocean without wetting your legs but it is impossible to cross life without wetting your eyes."

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I'm sorry, I almost want to yell at you to " Let him go," and love your life, but love doesn't work that way..

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and well done. right to the point.
Sandra♥

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree, how can you ever forget his voice. Nine years later, it still sounds exactly the same. The gentleness, the tone, the passion; they will always be in his voice and in your heart.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this. Simply and perfect.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this piece.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing phenomena, isn't it, that if you read something written by the one that means the most to you you can almost hear their voice reciting the words? No idea why that happens, but it serves as comforting and also pain-inflicting. I go back and read stuff of mom and dad's, since they themselves are gone. Brings small comfort at the price of reopening the wound a little bit. Worth it though, I think.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vrery nice piece ... very well done.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

chofu? well done my friend keep trying new, this is very well done.. and well written..

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was short and the emotion was expressed well. Nice write. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


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