Music for my soul.

Music for my soul.

A Poem by Imperfection
"

Chofu for the contest.

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From your old letters
And in
Your final e-mail to me,
I can still hear it clearly.
It is -
-the sound of your voice.

 

© 2008 Imperfection


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This is great and so beautiful!
Short but so powerful and vivid...Full of emotions!
Every mail speaks for itself , As such according me whenever we reads any mail it seems as if that person is literally talking to us...I have a poem which is somehow very close it (My old attic)...I guess you have already read it :)
That picture is going very well with it and Congrats for winning the contest too! :)

"It is possible to cross an ocean without wetting your legs but it is impossible to cross life without wetting your eyes."

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very nice!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simple yet very beautiful, theres a strong voice. nicely done. i do think that the last picture is too large and steals away from the beauty of the words though.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing piece of writing. Perfectly spoken. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is excellent and said so simply that the pain and longing are unmistakable. The photo emphasizes Every word. Great raw emotion.
Debby


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great and so beautiful!
Short but so powerful and vivid...Full of emotions!
Every mail speaks for itself , As such according me whenever we reads any mail it seems as if that person is literally talking to us...I have a poem which is somehow very close it (My old attic)...I guess you have already read it :)
That picture is going very well with it and Congrats for winning the contest too! :)

"It is possible to cross an ocean without wetting your legs but it is impossible to cross life without wetting your eyes."

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply put, and effective. More a cry from the heart than a poem, in the strict sense, but valid nevertheless.
David.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much said in so few words..I too like one below have never heard of this type of poetry..more Japanese I would expect..God bless..Valentine

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very poignant image with so little words. Bound by taunting whispers of the past. I've never heard of this form of poetry, might you send me a message explaining?

~nicely done~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done. Good job. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written,:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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