Music for my soul.

Chofu for the contest.

 

 

 

 

From your old letters
And in
Your final e-mail to me,
I can still hear it clearly.
It is -
-the sound of your voice.

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is great and so beautiful!
Short but so powerful and vivid...Full of emotions!
Every mail speaks for itself , As such according me whenever we reads any mail it seems as if that person is literally talking to us...I have a poem which is somehow very close it (My old attic)...I guess you have already read it :)
That picture is going very well with it and Congrats for winning the contest too! :)

"It is possible to cross an ocean without wetting your legs but it is impossible to cross life without wetting your eyes."

[Frances O'Neill]

Very nice!

[Tenten]

simple yet very beautiful, theres a strong voice. nicely done. i do think that the last picture is too large and steals away from the beauty of the words though.

[Brianna Brie]

Amazing piece of writing. Perfectly spoken. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is excellent and said so simply that the pain and longing are unmistakable. The photo emphasizes Every word. Great raw emotion.
Debby

[David Lewis Paget]

Simply put, and effective. More a cry from the heart than a poem, in the strict sense, but valid nevertheless.
David.

[Valentine]

So much said in so few words..I too like one below have never heard of this type of poetry..more Japanese I would expect..God bless..Valentine

[Rambling Prose]

Very poignant image with so little words. Bound by taunting whispers of the past. I've never heard of this form of poetry, might you send me a message explaining?

~nicely done~

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Nicely done. Good job. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[V. K. Harris]

Nicely written,:)