Still with you.

I wrote this Senryu after we parted ways amicably. I would have preferred not to but that�s what was required of me then. Now I live with thoughts of him.

 

 

 

The end of this road

Is not a new beginning...

...for I still love you.

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Beautiful senryu !
I really loved this one....too emotional and painful indeed.
I know it is damn hard to close a chapter in your life and even to carry on , pretending that nothings ever went wrong..
Great write :)

"People say that you don't know what you have until you lose it,
But it's not like that...
You always know what you have, you just never thought you would lose it" :)

[Gandré]

this is sweet and I like it so much. says a lot. there is always a new beginning.

[Anthony Thomas]

This was very short and passionate. Sometimes saying things in a simple way is far better than dragging out the point. This was exquisite.