Still with you.

I wrote this Senryu after we parted ways amicably. I would have preferred not to but that�s what was required of me then. Now I live with thoughts of him.

 

 

 

The end of this road

Is not a new beginning...

...for I still love you.

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Beautiful senryu !
I really loved this one....too emotional and painful indeed.
I know it is damn hard to close a chapter in your life and even to carry on , pretending that nothings ever went wrong..
Great write :)

"People say that you don't know what you have until you lose it,
But it's not like that...
You always know what you have, you just never thought you would lose it" :)

[Brette Medb]

So short yet so wonderfully powerful and filled with so much meaning... great write!




Blessed Be

[Sean M. Addams]

very nice job on this... i like the ending very powerful.

[Ivory]

Sad, but beautifully written senryu.
Very good write : )

[Ladysue]

Heartbreaking words. This was very effective. Great piece.

[Shane Patrick]

pointed great Senryu... well done again my friend.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

What sadness to paint with these words....

[Karianna Allum]

I can totally relate. Its like being suspended in air.

[April Child]

These few little words fill me with sadness. Beautiful.

[Yvonne Heidt]

I really liked this! Ends aren't always new beginnings. Great job.

[James K. Blaylock]

A powerful little Senyru, good luck on the contest!