Bad Luck brought you here

True

I would have warned you

Had I known that destiny

Would bring you to me.

 

Reviews

[PianoandPage]

first of all i love the picture you use with this.

the 3 lines work so very well with each other

the 5 / 7 / 5 makes this flow up and then drops into a little surprise ending.

it makes me imagine an epic tale... all the details as nothing compared to the ultimate sentiment of love.

this is a piece that could be interpreted many different ways but each i think would contain a level of tragedy.

[Dorothy]

Wow. Very powerful and yet short. It almost is as if the words are that much more important because each one is chosen for its meaning. Well written and beautiful!

[desertraven]

Yes indeed. Straight to the point. I like that.
Sandra♥

[James Mayfield]

A sad sentiment indeed. There are times that I would have to agree. There is somebody that I've hurt and been hurt by so many times that I almost think she would be better off without me.

[Gandré]

ohh What a beauty in 3 lines! Who can do that...some things necessarily happen, but don't think so. I believe that relationships are not about being not good but about creating harmony or not. There is a match or it is not. But I might be wrong. I enjoyed it.

well that made 50 % - was a mistake. I cannot change it...
wanted to give you 100.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So powerful in it's short statement...

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

So much can be said in so few words. Thank you for sharing. debileah

[Spoken]

That's the magic of words. You can say profound things with so few syllables. I've really connected with the emotion behind this. Ignites my memory. Love it

[Shalini R]

wow thats great
i conquer with this feeling
and you cant fight destiny. canmt always see it coming
great twist, great write here

[S. P. Vaporis]

funny how 3 lines can evoke a hundred questions. this is perfect poetry in my opinion. ~peace~

[Sean M. Addams]

very nicely done...deep message in this one...